Ricardo is a student of Geography in the University of Chile, we are schoolmates in the same campus, the Architecture, Design and Urbanism Faculty. The last year Ricardo was on highers and now he could start to study their favourite major.
The blog of Ricardo is called "Ricky's Blog" and have a sad desing, the background is a picture of some snowy mountains seen trough a window and the texts are written over a black sheet.
Ricardo has wrote five posts, trhee of them with a picture or a video.
Now I'm going to analyse a post of Ricardo.
I choose a post called "A song that I love", this post seemed me more interesting because include a video. This post have 231 words which describe the Ricardo's emotions with the song "Por La Ciudad" from the album "De Bichos Y Flores" of the uruguayan group "La Vela Puerca".
The Ricardo's post with my corrections:
"Hello
everyone!
This
is a musical moment, today I´d like to talk about a song that is always the
first I play in the guitar, every time I take the guitar. The song is called
"Por la Ciudad" and it´s wirted [WO = WRITED]
by an Uruguayan grupo [WO = GROUP] named
"La Vela Puerca".
I
play it first because it´s very easy, just the note G, but with a rhythm WW (RHYTHM) a little bit particular. The song belongs
to the disc "De bichos y flores".
The
first time I heard this song was six years ago, when I was in Primero Medio
(2010). I heard it because when I went for the first time to Argentina, my
friends were listening and playing songs in the guitar of this band. In that
moment I get in love of that band, I like too much the songs. Specially this,
because was the first one I heard, and also because at the final of the song,
it takes a rhythm of ska style, with drums, trumpets, electric guitar and a
bass. I like too much this combination of instruments.
Also, NN the songs NN talk about things of the
life of NN a person who wants not to be sad, loves to NN his friends and to NN have
good times with them.
I
would like someday SM (GOING) to a concert of La
Vela Puerca, if they come to Chile."
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